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    Question Couples Profile Reviews

    I just posted a similar thread in the Swinging & Single forum, but I thought it would also be a good idea for couples as we do occasionally have couples who come here asking for a critique of their ad.

    So if you'd like to have your ad critiqued by others, please post your link here and we'll all take a look and give you some honest feedback.


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    Julie,
    We would love to have you look over our profile. ranchcouple on SLS

    Thanks,
    ranchcouple

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    I am not sure how to copy link with our profile too, but would love any comments on our profile, good or bad.

    TnTDaytonOhio on SLS

    Thank you

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    Quote Originally Posted by ranchcouple3
    Julie,
    We would love to have you look over our profile. ranchcouple on SLS

    Thanks,
    ranchcouple
    Hey ranchcouple!

    Your add looks okay, but can I suggest a few things?

    The default pic on your profile (which is of the Mr. for those of us who are non-paying) should be G-rated. As a woman, I find G-rated pics of males more pleasing and they make the couple more approachable to me.

    Also, under the 'Describe Yourself' area of your profile, you have a typo on the second line, between "either and safe".

    Another thing I noticed, is that you're listed as a "Moderate" couple, but you don't really elaborate on what kind of sexual experiences you're willing to try or are interested in. For example, soft swing, same room sex, voyeurism, etc... The reader needs to know what they might have in common with you, so they'll be comfortable contacting you.
    Ves

    The art of life lies in taking pleasures as they pass, and the keenest pleasures are not intellectual, nor are they always moral.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ranchcouple3
    Julie,
    We would love to have you look over our profile. ranchcouple on SLS

    Thanks,
    ranchcouple
    I licked on your link and it prompted me to write an email to u--not see your profile.

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    Quote Originally Posted by tnt Dayton ohio
    I am not sure how to copy link with our profile too, but would love any comments on our profile, good or bad.

    TnTDaytonOhio on SLS


    Thank you
    Wow!

    Great profile! I wish the couples that contacted us would be as 'real' as you two appear to be.

    Usually when you don't have any pics on your profile, a lot of people will tend to pass it by. Since you're concerned with discretion, which is understandable, why not place some other types of pics. They don't even have to be of you two. Maybe find a few pics that describe who or what ya'll are about. For instance, the country club you play golf at or a favorite animal or even a funny cartoon couple.

    On SLS, you can do a general search for couples and exclude ones that don't have pics from your search. Since you are paid members, it shows that you have a real interest in swinging and not just passing by taking a peek, but couples might miss you from their general searches if they browse the site the way I mentioned. If you have some sort of pic on your profile, you're apt to get more traffic to your profile.

    Also, if I were you, I'd lose the 'stage fright' reference. Everything else is so well written, but that leads the reader to wonder how delicate your wife is and alludes that she's easily made uncomfortable. I'd chop that sentence off at the word 'slow". That conveys the message nicely.
    Ves

    The art of life lies in taking pleasures as they pass, and the keenest pleasures are not intellectual, nor are they always moral.

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    Ranchcouple, speaking of your SLS profile, you might want to fix your profile here via the User CP to list your correct username on SLS (you currently have it listed as ranchcouple3 rather than ranchcouple

    Regarding your profile itself... I think this is the type that Ves was referring to, it caught my eye as well because it left me confused.
    and don't expect you to be either is "safe" she is not.
    Also have to agree with Ves that you should elaborate on what it is you are looking for (i.e. full swap? soft swing? less now more later?). I also thought your choice for default (and only non-private pic) was a bit odd. It's nice to see an add that actually includes a picture of the male half, but when no picture of the female half is visible it tends to make me wonder if she knows the ad exists (or if she exists). I liked the pic itself but you might want to show both of you.

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    TnTDaytonOhio - great profile, the only thing I'd like to see added is a picture, even g-rated with or without faces. Without a picture I would suggest maybe attempting to describe yourselves physically a little more detailed.

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    hey, you can check out hubby and I's... tracy1878 on swinglifestyle.com I think that's the right way to do it, if not, it's the same on there as it is on here. Thanks for the feedback!


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    Quote Originally Posted by tracy1878
    hey, you can check out hubby and I's... tracy1878 on swinglifestyle.com I think that's the right way to do it, if not, it's the same on there as it is on here. Thanks for the feedback!
    Hi guys! Great profile and nice choice of pics!

    I found a couple of typos, however.

    "Definitely" and "experience".

    Ya'll have a great add, you include just the right amount of information about yourselves and I adore the default pic of the two of you.
    Ves

    The art of life lies in taking pleasures as they pass, and the keenest pleasures are not intellectual, nor are they always moral.

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    *grr* spelling.... never was very good at that!! Thanks!!

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    Thanks to all who responded, we really appreciate it!

    I see your points and will fix them...again THANK YOU.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Vespertine
    Hi guys! Great profile and nice choice of pics!
    I'll just ditto that.

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    Ours is curious1918 on Swinglifestyle We will take any comment good or bad...or any ideas on how to improve it.

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    Do us next, Julie.
    NakedInSeattle

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    We would love someone to review our profile. wicpl2002us on swinglifestyle.com
    "The difference between fiction and reality? Fiction has to make sense."
    - Tom Clancy

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    Will you do ours please.

    loveonme01 on sls


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    Although I am not Julie, I wanted to Chime in NakedInSeattle.

    I think that you have a great profile! Your pictures are fantastic and tastefully done. I love that you have added a picture of you guys with your little dog. It left me with the impression that you are fun, kind and genuine.

    I think your descriptions are nice. You have definitely covered a lot of ground. I wonder if it would read better if you included combined descriptions Such as:

    'She is an active tri-athlete, who loves SCUBA diving, sports, and gourmet cooking. We are avid Nudists who love the outdoors.'

    Also, I am not sure what the Fraternity thing is, but I think that may be a cute tag line. It would definitely get my attention.
    Mrs. Indy

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    Don't leave it to me to comment here, please. My idea was for anyone to review others profiles and to have their own reviewed if they like. We all see different things when we look and while a profile may be perfect to one person someone else may see something that jumps out at them as a great big red flag or question mark. We can all learn something from this

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    Quote Originally Posted by wiscpl
    We would love someone to review our profile. wicpl2002us on swinglifestyle.com
    The thing that jumped out at me was that you joined SLS is 2002 and still haven't been certified, or have a picture on-line. I would immediately think you were a man whose wife doesn't know anything about this. That may not be the case, but that is my immediate reaction when I see an that.

    There were a couple of typos in the ad, but I think if you copy and paste your ad into MS Word, it will tell you where the grammatical and spelling errors are, and give you suggestions on repairing them.
    Mrs. Indy

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    gapfiller on swinglifestyle

    I would love some outside opinions, bring it on, I can take it.

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    Biblonde I really can't come up with anything to say about yours. Great pics, and you obviously have put a lot of thought into your profile. It's thorough and interesting.

    NakedInSeattle, I have to agree with Indy, I found myself with two questions reading your profile - what the heck is Fraternity Snoqualmie? and how long have you guys been swinging?

    Wiscpl - a picture would probably increase your responses. Although you do address that and hopefully the way you have addressed it increases the number of serious replies that you get to your ad.
    I'm wondering if you find yourselves getting responses from single guys. Even tho you don't mention single guys in your ad I saw a couple of things that might draw them to you like,
    watching her with another man. If this is what you like let us know.

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    loveonme01 - your pictures leave me wondering if you are a 2female couple. No pics of the guy whatsoever? And you don't list a weight for him, I noticed. Those two things together would definitely leave me wondering what was up with you two.

    all so =also

    I would suggest taking some time to go back through and write out your responses rather than using shorthand and actually capitalize your sentences, etc. Remember, this is your first impression; and things like this
    i have been with a cpl of Lady's b/f
    leave one unsure if you are saying you've been with a couple of ladies before, or a couple of lady's boyfriends.

    Your profile is very centered around the female half. Does the male not participate? If so you should make that clear. Does he just like to watch? You mentioned your desire to give him a FMF threesome, are you interested in swapping partners with another couple? You did mention seeking couples. Or, are you guys just looking for bi females willing to join the two of you.

    Basically, I would just really take some time to express what it is that you are looking for. I'm sure you know what that is, but you have to make sure that those reading your profile know when they are doing reading.

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    Quote Originally Posted by smileytattoo
    gapfiller on swinglifestyle.com

    I would love some outside opinions, bring it on, I can take it.
    Love the tats! Profile looks okay to us, but I would leave out the pet part. That just makes ya go ewwww even though that isn't something you are into. Most aren't, so doesn't need to be said.

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    The thing that jumped out at me was that you joined SLS is 2002 and still haven't been certified, or have a picture on-line. I would immediately think you were a man whose wife doesn't know anything about this. That may not be the case, but that is my immediate reaction when I see an that.
    I can see what you mean. Although I, the male half, do most of the posting she is in this 100%. There are two reasons we haven't been certified on SLS. 1) The couples we have meet on SLS were not paid members and you need to be a paid member to certify someone. 2) We haven't had much luck finding couples we are interested in. We are not snobs but we have certain criteria that we go by. This reduces the amount of success we have on there but that is by our choice.

    Thanks for the feedback northindycpl. We had pictures but took them down and are in the process of getting more. (Which can be just as much fun as swinging at times.)
    "The difference between fiction and reality? Fiction has to make sense."
    - Tom Clancy


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