Singles Profile Reviews

[SW_PA_Couple]

Originally Posted by Ilove24nik8

Hmm sorry about that, here you go:

Real Swingers Home Page. ilove24nik8

Generally looks good. I always cheer those who put a picture in with their profile. Some observations and suggestions:

* After my first reading I had the impression that you are not so much looking for sex as you are hoping to develop a friendship with a woman or a couple in front of whom you can pose provocatively while they admire your Johnson.

* Seeing the word "educated" in the same sentence with three obviously misspelled words is going to turn some prospective partners away.

* You will gain very little by telling people you used to have certifications but they disappeared.

Good luck in your quest.

~Michael

[Ilove24nik8]

Originally Posted by SW_PA_Couple

Generally looks good. I always cheer those who put a picture in with their profile. Some observations and suggestions:

* After my first reading I had the impression that you are not so much looking for sex as you are hoping to develop a friendship with a woman or a couple in front of whom you can pose provocatively while they admire your Johnson.

* Seeing the word "educated" in the same sentence with three obviously misspelled words is going to turn some prospective partners away.

* You will gain very little by telling people you used to have certifications but they disappeared.

Good luck in your quest.

~Michael

Some good suggestions; I don't understand the one saying there are 3 misspelled words, I don't see any spelling errors.... please clarify which words I spelled incorrectly.


I will change the profile according to your other suggestions, how would you recommend I re-word it so it does seem like I'm looking for intercourse without sounding like thats all I want?


Also, currently I am having NO LUCK whatsoever, I'm wondering why that is exactly...

[SW_PA_Couple]

Originally Posted by Ilove24nik8

Also, currently I am having NO LUCK whatsoever, I'm wondering why that is exactly...

Making connections at a swingers' Web site is not an exact science. Your profile is only a month old so give it more time. Even if the number of responses you have received thus far is zero, your experience would be entirely within the norm. If you persist, you'll get to where you need to be.

I almost always regret saying anything about spelling, grammar, punctuation or writing style. But you did ask for a review. Consider this, "Educated, respectful, straight and tall. My endowment is 8 and 3/4 in. long, thick as a Red Bull can."

[N8ture Girl]

Originally Posted by Ilove24nik8

Hmm sorry about that, here you go:

Real Swingers Home Page. ilove24nik8

Ok, forgive me if I am being nit pickey, I can't sleep and I am bored...
Your tag line "Educated, respectful, straight and tall." Straight and tall as opposed to crooked and tall. I don't know it just sounds funny. It doesnt flow right. Educated and respectful go together, but orientation and height just does not. Maybe something like "Educated, respectful, tall and well endowed."

Under describe your self, get rid of the 4th paragraph, its not needed. Make a quick reference of size and add make that your first sentence in the last paragragh.
And if I am not mistaken (someone correct me if I am wrong, cause their everywhere) but you can have those pics (naked, cock shots, etc) on Swing Lifestyle under you private gallery pics. Safer than e-mailing them. But thats your choice.

Again sorry for being nit pickey, just my observations. And as far has having no luck so far, thats not uncommon. If you have done any reading so far on this board, you will find that single men have a hard time sometimes. Single men are a dime a dozen, saturated market. Hit the swing clubs that allow single men, and the Meet and Greets too. Be patient, good things come to those who wait.

Good luck!

[SW_PA_Couple]

Originally Posted by N8ture Girl

Under describe your self, get rid of the 4th paragraph, its not needed. Make a quick reference of size and add make that your first sentence in the last paragraph.

I too recommend this.

Originally Posted by N8ture Girl

And if I am not mistaken (someone correct me if I am wrong, cause their everywhere) but you can have those pics (naked, cock shots, etc) on Swing Lifestyle under you private gallery pics. Safer than e-mailing them. But thats your choice.

Yes. Having private pictures at S L S is much safer than sending them by e-mail. In addition, many people will be suspicious of any suggestion to start an e-mail exchange as they perceive it as an attempt to get them put onto a list for receiving spam. N8ture Girl is correct in all of this but you will not, of course, be able to post private pictures unless you decide to become a paid member.

As before, I hope this is helpful.

[SouthernGent88]

This thread was a great idea. I have attached the link to for my profile. I appreciate any feedback anyone is willing to provide. Thanks

http://www1.sdc.com/topmenu_fs.aspx?StartPage=welcome.aspx&AccountID=Q G3109&login=1/10/2010[/URL]

[SouthernGent88]

This thread was a great idea. I have attached the link to for my profile. I appreciate any feedback anyone is willing to provide. Thanks


http://www1.sdc.com/topmenu_fs.aspx?...ogin=1/10/2010

[SW_PA_Couple]

Originally Posted by SouthernGent88

This thread was a great idea. I have attached the link to for my profile. I appreciate any feedback anyone is willing to provide. Thanks


http://http://www1.sdc.com/topmenu_f...ogin=1/10/2010

Would love to review your profile but I think you or one of the moderators is going to have to fix your link. I have a strong suspicion that starting with http://http:// is not right. When I cut and past the remainer of the path into my Web browser, the Web site wants to place cookies that I do not want to have on my hard drive. Hope to be able to help when I can.

~Michael

[JustAskJulie]

Originally Posted by SouthernGent88

This thread was a great idea. I have attached the link to for my profile. I appreciate any feedback anyone is willing to provide. Thanks


http://www1.sdc.com/topmenu_fs.aspx?...ogin=1/10/2010

Originally Posted by SW_PA_Couple

Would love to review your profile but I think you or one of the moderators is going to have to fix your link. I have a strong suspicion that starting with http://http:// is not right. When I cut and past the remainer of the path into my Web browser, the Web site wants to place cookies that I do not want to have on my hard drive. Hope to be able to help when I can.

~Michael

Fixed the link (I think)

[SW_PA_Couple]

Originally Posted by SouthernGent88

This thread was a great idea. I have attached the link to for my profile. I appreciate any feedback anyone is willing to provide. Thanks


http://www1.sdc.com/topmenu_fs.aspx?...ogin=1/10/2010

I think, Mr. SouthernGent88, that if you post your swingers date club screen name here people, at least those who are also swingers date club.com members and who have logged on to that Web site, will be able to see your profile.

[SouthernGent88]

Michael,

Yes...I had a little difficulty posting the link. I'm not sure why it does not work. If anyone is a member of swingers date club.com my profile can be found under the handle QG3109.

[N8ture Girl]

Originally Posted by SouthernGent88

Michael,

Yes...I had a little difficulty posting the link. I'm not sure why it does not work. If anyone is a member of swingers date club.com my profile can be found under the handle QG3109.

Why not just copy and paste so us non memebrs can take a look at it?


Just a thought...

[SouthernGent88]

That is a good suggestion and I thought about doing that. However, swingers date club does not allow any material on a person's profile to be copied and pasted. The site does not permit a person to right click on the profiles.

[HackYOURS]

Hello to all the horny people of this amazing forum

Here is my profile for you all to review Adult Swingers Personals Service and LifeStyle info.

Just a simple honest profile. Hope you guys like it.
Please note that I have some more pics waiting for approval on swing lifestyle

P.S. hello to northgacpl

[SW_PA_Couple]

Originally Posted by HackYOURS

Hello to all the horny people of this amazing forum

Here is my profile for you all to review

Welcome to The Swingersboard. Hope you are finding it all to be fun and informative.

Just thought I'd let you know -- the link leads to the S L S log-on page rather than to a profile. Let us know your profile name and we'll have a look. I took a guess and checked for a profile named HackYOURS and found none.

~Michael