Trouble May be Brewing in Poly Triad

[LikeMinds321]

YZF ~

How long have you been a fiction writer?

Is this book coming out in May your first?

LM

[slevin]

Originally Posted by LikeMinds321

YZF ~

How long have you been a fiction writer?

[SW_PA_Couple]

Originally Posted by slevin

Somebody please guide Quita to this Web site and get her set up with a membership. She can tell her story in Spanish. I speak Spanish. I can interpret.

I'd be furious to think that somebody was telling my story at a Web site and I did not know. That remark about she doesn't even speak English just lit my fuse. It's that simple.

~Michael

[YZF]

Originally Posted by SW_PA_Couple

Somebody please guide Quita to this Web site and get her set up with a membership. She can tell her story in Spanish. I speak Spanish. I can interpret.

I'd be furious to think that somebody was telling my story at a Web site and I did not know. That remark about she doesn't even speak English just lit my fuse. It's that simple.

~Michael

Mrs. YZF here. Michael, I really appreciate your willingness to help. It would help greatly if she and I could communicate through a neutral party. YZF could interpret but I would wonder if he was putting his spin on things.

Through YZF I let her know that she could put her side of what happened on here. She does not want to set up a membership since this will be her only participation but she is willing to participate in this thread in Spanish.


Quita: Hola y muchos saludos a usted, Michael and a los otros membros de SB. Como ya saben, gracias a la Morena, tenemos una problema en huestro matrimonio comun. YZF y Jack son los casados, yo tengo un ano como tercera. No se que es la problema. Yo a compartido el sexo con YZF, con Jack y con los dos. YZF tiene una buena fortuna y es muy caridoso con su dinero. Jack es doctora y tambien tiene una buena cantidad.

Jack a comenzado a fijarce en el dinero que YZF mi da para gastar. La mera verdad, no lo necesito. Mi familia tiene grandes empresas en Equador. Lo que mi duele es que estoy con YZF y Jack mas por Jack que por el. Si hay a alguien que amo, es a ella. Si, meti la pata con pasarme la noche con el y dejar a Jack afuera. Yo no pense que una noche fuera causar esto. Yo deseo poder comunicar mas con Jack. Quiero decirle que la amo. Estoy con su esposo por que se que ella lo ama and con darle gusto a el, le doy gusto a ella.

Yo no quiero a YZF para mi. Si ella se va, mi voy yo tambien. Yo mi quede con ellos por los dos. Bueno, mas por ella, pero yo no mi quedaria sola ni con uno ni el otro.

[cpl36996]

Ok, let me translate for those who dont speack spanish:

Quita:Hi, I salute you all, Michael and the other members of SB. As you know, thanks to Morena, we have a problem in our common relationship. YZF and Jack are married, and I been the thrird for a year. I dont know what's the problem. I have share sex with YZF, Jack and both. YZF has a good fortune and is very caritative with his money. Jack is a doctor and also has good amount.
Jack has started to pay attention on the money that YZF give me to spend. The truth is, that I dont need it. My family has big enterprices in Ecuador.
What hurts is that I'm with YZF and Jack more for Jack than he. If theres someone who I love, is her. Yes, I made a mistake spending the night with him and leave Jack out. I did not think that one night would come to this. I would like to communicate more with Jack. I would like to said that I love her.
I'm with her hubby because I know she love him and by giving what he wants I give her what she wants.
I dont want YZF for myself. If she leave, I'll leave too. I'll stay because the two of them. Well, more for her, I will not stay alone with neither one or the other.

[two4youinswva]

Quita was Ms. Venezuela runner-up, but her family has big enterprises in Ecuador.

Jack, who used to be Carly, is a doctor, and YZF has a "good fortune", but five years or so ago was just out of prison, complete with prison tattoos, and working at a gas station, screwing some guy's wife better than her husband could.

Five days ago, Carly/Jack was offering up some anal sex to another board member she's (presumably) never met.

Two days after that, it's "Houston, we may have a problem".

Respectfully, I think in your profile, you need to change your location from Texas to "Fantasy Island".

[PB&J]

Originally Posted by two4youinswva

Respectfully, I think in your profile, you need to change your location from Texas to "Fantasy Island".

Yes, while it's never seemed terribly realistic, it now seems to have jumped the shark, and just in time for the release of YZF's novel.

[cocpl2007]

Does sound like there is a chance, once emotions continue to cool, that you'll be back in the same bed, all snug as bunch of bugs, in a short while. Someone just goofed, and has the desire to make amends... in Quita's case, now we'll see if YFZ has some other agenda going on.

Wealth and Beauty... add in some sex, and you have the makings of tabloid material!

[cocpl2007]

Smart folks here on the board, if you are going to be telling "stories" you best keep track of what you've spun, they'll catch you on it every time!

[LikeMinds321]

Originally Posted by YZF

Polyamory Third is Encroaching

Mrs. YZF here...YZF's book is not on swinging, it is a novel. He already bought a pipe and a tweed jacket with patches on the elbows. If his book does well there will be no living with him.

It seems there will be no living with him no matter how his book does.

Originally Posted by YZF

...I'll probably move into one of our rental properties and let them have each other, see how long it lasts.

LM

[JustAskJulie]

Even if all of the stories stacked up to make one true one... it would be yet another one we'd have to file under

So many red flags here. If this story were all true... Mrs YZF why would you want to be in a relationship where it's obvious that you trust no one else involved in it?

I'm currently of the belief that since YZF got pounded for promoting his book here that he took to using this board as a way to practice his fiction writing. The funny thing is that he was the one posting right up till that point. Evidently, it's easier for him to write fiction as a fictional character. Who knows maybe some of the earliest posts were true (including the prison), maybe none of it... whatever the case at least some of it is BS cuz the stories just don't mesh. I hope you do a better job of story flow in your novels.

[YZF]

Originally Posted by two4youinswva

Quita was Ms. Venezuela runner-up, but her family has big enterprises in Ecuador.

Jack, who used to be Carly, is a doctor, and YZF has a "good fortune", but five years or so ago was just out of prison, complete with prison tattoos, and working at a gas station, screwing some guy's wife better than her husband could.

Five days ago, Carly/Jack was offering up some anal sex to another board member she's (presumably) never met.

Two days after that, it's "Houston, we may have a problem".

Respectfully, I think in your profile, you need to change your location from Texas to "Fantasy Island".

YZF here. Let me address a few things. I was in prison and released in 2001. It was supposed to have been life with out parole but thankfully my lawyer was relentless and was able to get my sentence overturned. I was lucky and a case made it to the supreme court (New Jersey vs Apprendi). Facts in that case could be applied to mine and my lawyer used it to get me resentenced. My new sentence was 60 months, I had already done 74 so I was released. I left the courthouse, my lawyer drove me back to the prison and I was processed out and given what little I owned and I was a free man.

All I had to my name were a couple of horrid polo style shirts that were issued to me by the recieving and discharge section of the prison, a pair of jeans, and a pair of tennis shoes. I had a grand total of $100 in my comissary account and I was given $80 more upon release.

During my time in prison several things happened. I was estranged from my daughters. My first wife (Carly, that's where I got the name) had taken up with another man. I was never getting out so I did not blame her. My father had disowned me. I had nothing.

I got a job in a gas station and the owner let me stay in a store room of to the side of one of the bays. Basically I was homeless. The owner let me fix computers and motorcycles there when the place was closed so I made some money on the side. The owner of the gas station had promised himself that once his kids finished college he would sell the place since he was a teacher and wanted to do only that. He sold me the gas station in 2003. But it was a package deal. I had to agree to buy both the gas station and restaurant next door which he also owned. At the time the restaurant was closed. He did not like the restaurant business and he had always leased it out. It was an owner financed deal.

A couple of months later a guy leased the restaurant from me. A couple of months after that I bought an ice distributorship. One thing about being in prison is that if you are in long enough, it clears up your credit really well. Then I got lucky, a company moved into town for a while. The guy in charge asked me if I would enter an agreement with him for tires, fuel, servicing and what not. This was a geological exploration company. These guys start work at 5 in the morning. There were only 2 full service gas stations in town. I made a shitload of money these guys. I also sold the restaurant during this time and entered into a partnership with a guy who wanted to start a wireline and logging company. He had been working for such a company whose trucks had to come from 200 miles away to work in our area. When those trucks were busy the clients had to either wait (time is money in the oil fields) or bring trucks in from much further away in New Mexico.

I went into the deal with him. One logging truck, one wireline truck and we had enough work to book them solid and with in months we had bought another logging truck and two wireline trucks.

I had started seeing Jack in 2001 a couple of months after I got out of prison and she went from a friends with benefits to exclusive girlfriend to wife over time.

In 2006 we decided to move in together and I moved to her. I sold the gas station, ice distributorship and my half of the wireline and logging company (that had expanded twice more) to my partner.

I had also patched things up with my dad. My dad passed away in 2007 leaving me a large inheritance and holdings in a couple of local companies which I promptly sold.


Jack offering up booty to another member here is just playful banter with someone she will likely never meet. At least that is how I take it.

[lustylearning]

Originally Posted by JustAskJulie

I hope you do a better job of story flow in your novels.

Yeah... cuz this one sucked!

[SW_PA_Couple]

Originally Posted by cpl36996

Ok, let me translate for those who dont speack spanish:

Traduccion muy buena, claro. It's appreciated.

[WonderWhat]

Originally Posted by YZF

Quita: Hola y muchos saludos a usted, Michael and a los otros membros de SB. [...] Bueno, mas por ella, pero yo no mi quedaria sola ni con uno ni el otro.

Native Spanish speaker here. Teacher of English as a second language, to boot.

YYZ, your Spanish sucks. You should have gotten a native Spanish-speaking accomplice into your game and at least tried to crank out something that is not as evidently the product of a native English speaker.

Your grammatical constructions shout "I'm a gringo!" Evident misuse of gender articles, misspellings with clear ties to English cognates, simple grammatical constructions used by a five-year olds, weird word ordering...

If I were to point out the logical contradictions within your story, I'd write about ten thousand more words. But since nobody will pay me for that, I think I'll stop for now. I've got better things to do.


YYZ, you're full of it.

Julie, I think it would be a good idea to boot this impostor.