Couples Profile Reviews

[missseattle]

Hi all,

Would you be so kind to share your expertise with us? We both feel something is missing but don't know what (and we don't want to put any face shots or nakkid ones either). Thank you so much.

Miss S

[LikeMinds321]

Originally Posted by missseattle

Hi all,

Would you be so kind to share your expertise with us? We both feel something is missing but don't know what (and we don't want to put any face shots or nakkid ones either). Thank you so much.

Miss S

Hi Miss S ~

Overall you have a nice friendly profile. You might want to explain what you mean by "would like to develop friendships first." I found this thread in the Archives that may help you:

Looking for 'friends'?

I noticed that you don't list your weight and I think you can get by with that if you have a couple pictures that clearly give people a view of your physique, but without that people are going to wonder if you weigh 160, 200, 250 or 300 pounds. Your profile presently has only one public pic which is too cropped to help people know if they would be attracted to you. Public pictures don't have to be nudes, nor do they need to include your faces, but I feel they should give people a sense of your physiques. Perving other profiles will give you ideas for creative ways to take pictures. I think you'll receive more inquiries if you have a different public picture(s).

Finally, I'd add a closing statement to your profile that encourages people to contact you.

Welcome to the Board, BTW. Glad to have you here!

LM

[LikeMinds321]

Miss S ~

Here are some threads discussing profile pictures:

Pictures that turn you off!

Annoying Pics on Profiles?

Things Not to do in a Picture

LM

[missseattle]

Thanks LM for all the advice--I/we have put it in place. Cheers for being so helpful.

[ncmd_couple]

Miss S,

I tried to find your profile on SLS and didn't have any luck.

S

[jc4fun7]

Hello Everyone,

If you have time could you check out our SLS Profile, and see what we can do to make it a little more attractive. We dont get much traffic through our mail box. We really do want to meet some people.

The sls name is the same as our user name here.

[SW_PA_Couple]

Originally Posted by jc4fun7

Hello Everyone,

If you have time could you check out our SLS Profile, and see what we can do to make it a little more attractive. We dont get much traffic through our mail box. We really do want to meet some people.

The sls name is the same as our user name here.

Your profile looks, overall, pretty well constructed and very attractive. No problem in that department. I would recommend re-wording the "Who we are looking for" section. I was, personally, left wondering what kind of person a "younger girl older guy" might be. "Our dream couple would be" is not a complete sentence. Would be what? I get the impression you are looking for a single woman. If so, you should not expect a lot of traffic. Single women do not, generally, initiate an e-mail exchange. You will have to initiate the exchange. Hope this helps.

~Michael

[Willing29]

Originally Posted by SW_PA_Couple

Your profile looks, overall, pretty well constructed and very attractive. No problem in that department. I would recommend re-wording the "Who we are looking for" section. I was, personally, left wondering what kind of person a "younger girl older guy" might be. "Our dream couple would be" is not a complete sentence. Would be what? I get the impression you are looking for a single woman. If so, you should not expect a lot of traffic. Single women do not, generally, initiate an e-mail exchange. You will have to initiate the exchange. Hope this helps.

~Michael

I agree with the statement of what a "younger girl older guy" meant. Maybe re-word it to be in more complete sentences, you have lots of space for that so don't worry about being too wordy. Also as mentioned start sending out e-mails to folks you want to talk to as well. I like how you have photos of both of you there already. Good luck!

[crazinred]

Ok here goes nothing We made a couples profile in several locations. SLS SZC SDC IWU the user name is crazinred on all. I Crazi did the profiles and Red hasn't had a spare moment to help on them so let me have it. Just be gentle please.

[LFM2]

Originally Posted by crazinred

Ok here goes nothing We made a couples profile in several locations. SLS SZC SDC IWU the user name is crazinred on all. I Crazi did the profiles and Red hasn't had a spare moment to help on them so let me have it. Just be gentle please.

I only looked in the SLS profile, so far -- it's a really good profile actually. Just a few things others will look at. Someone else can probably give you better suggestions, but this is my start.

In the "Describe yourself" section, you have a ??? out in the country. I think you meant to say house, place or something. You just forgot to put that in. (I've never done anything like that when I write things. )

Separate alittle in your next paragraph to read "a little".

In your fantasies section, it would probably read better for you to say that you'd really be interested in experiencing a strap on session with another woman. And -- spell out your numbers. 1=one. 4 wheeling should be 4-wheeling.

[Willing29]

Originally Posted by LFM2

I only looked in the SLS profile, so far -- it's a really good profile actually. Just a few things others will look at. Someone else can probably give you better suggestions, but this is my start.

In the "Describe yourself" section, you have a ??? out in the country. I think you meant to say house, place or something. You just forgot to put that in. (I've never done anything like that when I write things. )

Separate alittle in your next paragraph to read "a little".

In your fantasies section, it would probably read better for you to say that you'd really be interested in experiencing a strap on session with another woman. And -- spell out your numbers. 1=one. 4 wheeling should be 4-wheeling.

I agree with LFM2, just fix the "out in the country" thing and maybe a few little letters you left out, here and there. Other than that it looks good. BTW, I like that you have pictures of both of you up there. Whenever we see a profile with only one side it is a huge RED FLAG for us. The mud photos look fun!

Good Luck!

[crazinred]

Thanks for the info Red will be fixing my typo's when she get a spare moment.

[NotSorry]

we're new and interested in feedback, SLS username: vegcouple954