Couples Profile Reviews

[gnb4u]

Hi, everyone. This is an interesting feature and a great service you are all providing. Please take a look at our profile and feel free to tell us whatever you think. We are always trying to tweek it here and there so any thoughts and insights will be helpfull. Thank you

gnb4u on swinglifestyle.

[des1re06]

gnb4u on swinglifestyle

Excellent profile!

Drop us a note if you're ever in the area, and we'll go to the whitewater. We're about 30 minutes from the Olympic rafters area.


Mrs. D

[new2u]

Hi all,

I thought this might be the right place for some feedback. We just put up our profile, but want to see what public opinion is. Oh, and for some reason, it seems to only be showing one picture right now... there are more, promise.

museandherartist

Edit: Now open to merciless & possibly painful critique
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If you havent seen us...

[SW_PA_Couple]

Originally Posted by new2u

museandherartist

Edit: Now open to merciless & possibly painful critique

First of all, welcome to the Swingersboard!!! I see this is your first post. Post often -- it's fun and informative.

Not here to inflict pain. First impression is that your profile is "alluring". Good job. A secondary impression, maybe a little too philosophical. Maybe that a true reflection -- one or both of you is a philosopher as well as an artist. I recommend directness so that you do not leave potential swap-mates guessing. Good to say that you play only at clubs. That's direct. Bravo!

My Two Cents

Michael

[June_C]

Hello... here follows our Swing Lifestyle profile. I am concerned it may be a bit over-the-top and many may doubt its sincerity. But we're looking for something very specific. Anyway... we'd welcome constructive criticism and suggestions. Thanxxx! Our Swing Lifestyle profile can be accessed at Real Swingers Home Page. voluptuousfellatrix

June C

[JustAskJulie]

Originally Posted by June_C

Hello... here follows our Swing Lifestyle profile. I am concerned it may be a bit over-the-top and many may doubt its sincerity. But we're looking for something very specific. Anyway... we'd welcome constructive criticism and suggestions. Thanxxx! Our Swing Lifestyle profile can be accessed at Real Swingers Home Page. voluptuousfellatrix

June C

I would have to agree with you that it's a bit over the top. If as a female I couldn't get past the first paragraph... I doubt most single guys are going to... which is fine as soon as they realize you are open to single guys they will be emailing you anyway. But sometimes less is more and you may just want to cut to the chase on what it is you are looking for and what you expect out of him.

Couple seeks single male who is attracted to BBW women and willing to let her give him a blowjob with a facial finish. We prefer guys who are willing to let us photograph the act. (something along those lines).

[SW_PA_Couple]

Originally Posted by JustAskJulie

I would have to agree with you that it's a bit over the top. If as a female I couldn't get past the first paragraph... I doubt most single guys are going to... which is fine as soon as they realize you are open to single guys they will be emailing you anyway. But sometimes less is more and you may just want to cut to the chase on what it is you are looking for and what you expect out of him.

Couple seeks single male who is attracted to BBW women and willing to let her give him a blowjob with a facial finish. We prefer guys who are willing to let us photograph the act. (something along those lines).

I can see, Ms. June_C, that you had a lot of fun composing your profile. What I would recomment is to put a brief statement, composed as JustAskJulie has suggested, at the top then elaborate, as you have already done, down below (I rather like it).

As for Julies suggestion (this is a critique of the critique) that women can more readily comprehend what they read welll all I have to say is, "hey, you, I heard that!"

[JustAskJulie]

Originally Posted by SW_PA_Couple

I can see, Ms. June_C, that you had a lot of fun composing your profile. What I would recomment is to put a brief statement, composed as JustAskJulie has suggested, at the top then elaborate, as you have already done, down below (I rather like it).

As for Julies suggestion (this is a critique of the critique) that women can more readily comprehend what they read welll all I have to say is, "hey, you, I heard that!"

Actually I never said or implied that... just the opposite. I said that as a woman I COULD NOT get past the first paragraph....

If I suggested anything it was that women may be more likely to enjoy the flowery descriptives used in the ad... but that I wasn't one of them.

[SW_PA_Couple]

Originally Posted by JustAskJulie

If I suggested anything it was that women may be more likely to enjoy the flowery descriptives used in the ad... but that I wasn't one of them.

OK, I misunderstood. Anyway, I have to repeat that I think voluptuousfellatrix did pretty good. I would be drawn in.

[mervsmom97]

ok so I'm new to this site and a few people recommended that I create a Swing Lifestyle account. PLeae help me out and tell me what you think. It would be greatly appreciated (not sure how to post the link, my name is mervsmom97)
thanks again

[des1re06]

mervsmom97 - very nice profile. You state exactly what you're looking for.

I wouldn't change a thing.


Mrs. D

[JustAskJulie]

Originally Posted by des1re06

mervsmom97 - very nice profile. You state exactly what you're looking for.

I wouldn't change a thing.


Mrs. D

[alphaplaycpl]

Please kindly review our profile. We are interested in tips on how we can improve. We would love to hear any constructive criticism or really neat ideas. We are also searching for a new attention-grabbing tag line... Any suggestions?

alpharettaplaycpl.swinglifestyle.com

[JustAskJulie]

Originally Posted by alphaplaycpl

Please kindly review our profile. We are interested in tips on how we can improve. We would love to hear any constructive criticism or really neat ideas. We are also searching for a new attention-grabbing tag line... Any suggestions?

alpharettaplaycpl.swinglifestyle.com

Looks good to me. I especially loved the line about having left the curious far behind.

[des1re06]

Nice profile and opening pic.

The only thing I would change is to move the part about "virtual relationships" up to the very beginning. There are alot of fake couples, picture collectors and cyber sexers out there.

Good luck and have fun!

Mrs. D