Couples Profile Reviews

[intuition897]

Thanks Pepper,
I'll actually go and change that. It's always a good idea to get an outsider's perspective on these things.

[DanBridget]

Could you all review our profile please. Thanks

http://Firedan.swinglifestyle.com

[SC_GAcouple]

Thank you for the responses...K redid the ad after my crappy attempt, but we do need to add a lot more.

R (f)

[JustAskJulie]

Originally Posted by good times

A lot of your profiles are so good it makes me a little self conscious about ours, but I can always use any suggestions that might improve it.

So here it is, let me know what you think.

I think your profile is great. The only thing I would suggest since you have a private pic (and this is really a suggestion to anyone who doesn't want to include public pictures) is to maybe explain in your profile that you will share pics when you are comfortable doing so. And, this may be just me, but when I see a private pic I tend to assume that it is a pic of privates - so if that's not the case, it's all the more reason to say something.

[JustAskJulie]

Originally Posted by cracker60479

We would love to hear comments and suggestions on our profile. Does anyone think our interests to be out of the mainstream of most swingers? Any thoughts will be appreciated. dodiddle@swinglifestyle.com

Picture: good - when you click to enlage it you can get a good overall idea of what you both look like.

I don't think your interests are out of the ordinary, they seem pretty normal (at least for swingers ).

The one thing I would suggest is taking a look at HOW you write out your answers to the various questions, at times I found myself confused as to whether you were describing yourselves or the people you were looking for (or both - which is probably the case and would explain the easy transitioning in your tenses). Complete sentances would help this immensely, rather than just a list of descriptives.

[JustAskJulie]

Originally Posted by NotsoNew

Here is ours if you want to take a look. Usually we are not taking a break, and do change our tag line from time to time. http://newbies123@swinglifestyle.com

As I've posted before I'm not a big fan of pictures that don't really give much of an idea of who I'm looking at. I also prefer to see both halves of a couple pictured (even without faces) - they don't have to be identifying.

You mention that the Mrs will be out of commission for 6 to 8 weeks, it might be nice if you either post from when or about when that time will be over. Otherwise, the reader doesn't know if that 6 to 8 weeks just started is almost over.

Other than that, excellent profile.

[good times]

Originally Posted by JustAskJulie

I think your profile is great. The only thing I would suggest since you have a private pic (and this is really a suggestion to anyone who doesn't want to include public pictures) is to maybe explain in your profile that you will share pics when you are comfortable doing so. And, this may be just me, but when I see a private pic I tend to assume that it is a pic of privates - so if that's not the case, it's all the more reason to say something.

Good suggestion, our picture is actually a professionally done portrait face picture. We are working on doing some nonface pic's, but although we have taken a few we weren't happy enough with them to put them up for public consumption. It's funny you mentioned this because after thinking about it I have to admit I usually assume the hidden pic's are the racy kind to.

[JustAskJulie]

Originally Posted by HotMoCpl

We're at: www.swinglifestyle.com under the name HotMo.

Please, anyone feel free to let us know what you think.

This was a little confusing to me:

We've both been down this road before but not as a couple. His long range goal is to share her with another man or more and share each other with another couple. Read carefully please. Our goal it to experience sex with the right couple. His goal is to experience her togeher with another man and hopefully more. He would also like to get it with two women at the same time, hopefully one will be my better half. Her goal....she hasn't really said WHAT it is yet.

At one point it seems to say that you are only looking for couples then you say he wants to see her with another man - which makes me think that single males would be accepted too. You may want to clarify that, especially if the latter is not the case. From reading the rest of your profile it looks like what you may want to say is that with the right couple you may play separately, or may like to play with a couple who will play separately. I'm still confused.

Also, because the whole female bi thing is so common in swinging and it appears from your last paragraph that you are both straight, you may want to mention that earlier, like when you describe yourselves and/or what you are looking for so that those who are not interested in straight couples won't have to read all the way through your profile just to find out you aren't interested in them.

[tnt Dayton ohio]

vespertine, Julie and all- thanks for feedback. Pictures have been in the works for awhile, and we finally got them on website today.

[NotsoNew]

Originally Posted by JustAskJulie

As I've posted before I'm not a big fan of pictures that don't really give much of an idea of who I'm looking at. I also prefer to see both halves of a couple pictured (even without faces) - they don't have to be identifying.

You mention that the Mrs will be out of commission for 6 to 8 weeks, it might be nice if you either post from when or about when that time will be over. Otherwise, the reader doesn't know if that 6 to 8 weeks just started is almost over.

Other than that, excellent profile.

Thanks for feedback Julie. Made the change to make more specific for time out.

We will work on getting a picture of us both that is not identifying. I just recently put that one up as public as we have always only had private pictures.

[NotsoNew]

Originally Posted by DanBridget

Could you all review our profile please. Thanks

http://Firedan.swinglifestyle.com

Hi Firedan -

Your profile looks good. Like the "update" - to me that shows that interested in trying new things.

[adventureUS2]

Let us know what you think. http://adventurUS.swinglifestyle.com

[DandS]

Hi All, I just set up a profile on Swing Lifestyle this morning and am hoping for some feedback. Please take a look: http://DandSOH.swinglifestyle.com

Thanks, D

[intuition897]

Originally Posted by DandS

Hi All, I just set up a profile on Swing Lifestyle this morning and am hoping for some feedback. Please take a look: http://DandSOH.swinglifestyle.com

Thanks, D

Hi DandS. Your profile looks great. The only two suggestions I would have are to correct a small typo (move=movie?) and to post a pic of Mr. DandS as well. The latter is just one Mr.'s and my pet peeves. If an ad states that it is a couple, and only HER pic is posted, it makes us wonder why didn't they post HIS pic, too? We just don't like the idea that someone might be trying to manipulate us into a high pressure situation. As in, using her gorgeous picture as bait, and then waiting until everyone has traveled X miles to meet them and find out that he's COMPLETELY unattractive. We just don't like 'bait' ads. Don't know why people feel the need to do this. I mean if we're incompatible, we're incompatible, and we'll find out what you look like eventually unless you plan to attend a meet-up with a bag over your head. I'm not saying this is the case with the two of you, but this is just what runs through our minds when we see ads with her pic only... or HIS pic only.

Originally Posted by DandS

Hi All, I just set up a profile on Swing Lifestyle this morning and am hoping for some feedback. Please take a look: http://DandSOH.swinglifestyle.com

Thanks, D

Dito A pic of the Mr. would be nice, other than that it looked fine to me.