Couples Profile Reviews

[Nymph an' Satyr]

It's a VERY nice profile Spoomonkey. But here is why it would not attract us.

1.You have no pictures at all. We are not going to bother with emails, sending attachments, etc. It's easy enough to do- but it's just time and aggravation.

2. You are not certified. And you have been members for almost a year. Not having been certified in that time frame makes us think that you are a want-to-be. The certification means that you have actually met someone- hence you are not a poser, lamer- or adjective of your choice. Doesn't mean that that is the case- but that's what runs through our minds.

We will meet non-certified couples- but only with some trepidation.

We respectfully disagree with Mr&Mrs-naughty's stance- but it seems that they have reasons. And they offered a solution- certification by the SLS management.

Add some pics- and make them private. And get certified.

Now as far as the prose itself- EXCELLENT. Wouldn't change a thing. Well, there is the "platmates" typo

[TNT]

Reading over all the great suggestions that have been given so far to everyone made us go back and flesh out our ad a little bit...reading over it again there are still a few things I have thought about adding but ya'll can take a look and see what's missing on it.

Here



Teresa

[Nymph an' Satyr]

TNT- EXCELLENT profile, in our humble opinion.

The pictures are tasteful, and erotic.

The prose is clear, and easy to read.

This could be a model template- again- in our humble opinion.

p.s. stop smoking- it's bad for erections

[SC_GAcouple]

I would love to hear suggestions for our profile.... SC_GAcouple

Thanks, R (f)

[Spoomonkey]

TNT - I thought it was great. The pictures are, as stated above, tasteful, yet VERY erotic.

Nice beach pics, too. Makes me miss home...



Spoomonkey

[northindycpl]

Ok.... We are northindycpl on SLS.

I dislike the ability to separate paragraphs in the descriptions. I have not been able to figure out how to do that if at all- Does anyone know?

We still get a lot of response to the ad, maybe 10 a week, plus the ones that we send there.

BTW, I like my naked pictures. So I want to keep them up. We aren't a face pic kinda couple

[northindycpl]

Originally Posted by SC_GAcouple

I would love to hear suggestions for our profile.... SC_GAcouple

Thanks, R (f)

I have a few suggestions: (I wasn't able to view the pictures yet, my kids haven't left for school )

-Avoid abbreviations
-Add a bit more information. I was wondering what kind of fun you were looking for? The ad leaves me with the impression that you are somewhat new, and so fun to you could mean flirting and some soft. I would be more inclined to respond if I clearly knew the perimeters of what you desire.
-I want to know more about you two. Are you professional? Do you enjoy going out to clubs, or would you prefer to have dinner? What are your hobbies? What you look like isn't as important to me as who you are.
-Now, since you are new, I would like to know more about your experiences, and your fantasies. Have you experienced a club- do you want to go back?
Is your fantasy to be with another couple or singles only?

thanks to those who checked out our profile. I took the suggestion of removing the part about pets.

[Chris&Suzanne]

Great, thanks for offering this for us. He is ours, and if anyone viewing it has any interest, please write us as well *smile* http://ChrisSuzanne.swinglifestyle.com

Please don't be kind, as we would really like to improve.

[JustAskJulie]

Originally Posted by SC_GAcouple

I would love to hear suggestions for our profile.... SC_GAcouple

Thanks, R (f)

I like your photo choices, very tasteful.

I have to agree with the earlier comment that you need to flesh it out a bit and be a little more descriptive with what it is you are hoping to find. Even if it's just to go to the fantasy section and actually list some of the fantasies you'd like to fulfill through swinging.

[JustAskJulie]

Originally Posted by Chris&Suzanne

Great, thanks for offering this for us. He is ours, and if anyone viewing it has any interest, please write us as well *smile* http://ChrisSuzanne.swinglifestyle.com

Please don't be kind, as we would really like to improve.

The picture (I always start here because it is the first thing you see when you open a profile). It looks like an add for Hedonism. We can barely see you. Logged in as a member, I can at least click and get a larger view which gives me an idea of your body types so it is better than no picture. But I might suggest cropping the picture to remove the big Hedonism logo and to put yourselves a little more center.

What does like-minded mean? I think I may start a thread with this question. Unless we know how you think, we don't know if we are like-minded. Open-minded might be a better adjective to use there.

What do you consider freaky? Is tying you up too much? Or do you just not want someone to bring their animals along?

soft-swings = soft-swingers

Fantasies and Experiences:

Our description pretty much answers this section

actually it doesn't. It gives us a little idea of your experiences, but nothing about your fantasies.

Please contact us, and if we are not a match please don't ignore us. Write and say we are not a match, and if you want to say why..but not necessary.

This is a little confusing, do you mean that anyone who looks at your profile should write you regardless of if they are interested? I assume you are referring to those you have written but you might want to clear that up.

[Chris&Suzanne]

Oww..just kidding. I see why things might be confusing, and the picture thing. We will work on making corrections. Thanks, love your board.

[good times]

A lot of your profiles are so good it makes me a little self conscious about ours, but I can always use any suggestions that might improve it.

So here it is, let me know what you think.

As far as certification goes, we have a lot of the reservations that the Naughty's mentioned about them. And while we have met a fair number of people as a result of our sls ad, no one has ever offered to certify us yet; I'm not really sure why that is though.

[northindycpl]

Originally Posted by Chris&Suzanne

Oww..just kidding. I see why things might be confusing, and the picture thing. We will work on making corrections. Thanks, love your board.

Dito to Julie! Cropping the picture would help a bit. I am also not sure what you mean with mentioning your trips. Are you wanting to arrange vacationing with others, or are those experiences you want others to know about?

The other thing I noticed was your desired age range. This is completely my opinion- and it may not be shared by others- Do you really want to swing with those 18 years or so younger? I wouldn't want to. I would also be leary of someone who was interested in me if I were 18-28 years younger. I would wonder what we have in common, how is it possible to click, the differences in our lifestyles, etc.

I do like your picture- it just needs to be closer.

[cracker60479]

We would love to hear comments and suggestions on our profile. Does anyone think our interests to be out of the mainstream of most swingers? Any thoughts will be appreciated. dodiddle@swinglifestyle.com