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| Swingers Board Addict Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 352 Location: Street, Maryland Status: Couple Swing Lifestyle Name:nymphansatyr
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It's a VERY nice profile Spoomonkey. But here is why it would not attract us. 1.You have no pictures at all. We are not going to bother with emails, sending attachments, etc. It's easy enough to do- but it's just time and aggravation. 2. You are not certified. And you have been members for almost a year. Not having been certified in that time frame makes us think that you are a want-to-be. The certification means that you have actually met someone- hence you are not a poser, lamer- or adjective of your choice. Doesn't mean that that is the case- but that's what runs through our minds. We will meet non-certified couples- but only with some trepidation. We respectfully disagree with Mr&Mrs-naughty's stance- but it seems that they have reasons. And they offered a solution- certification by the Swing Lifestyle management. Add some pics- and make them private. And get certified. Now as far as the prose itself- EXCELLENT. Wouldn't change a thing. Well, there is the "platmates" typo |
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| Julie's Helper Join Date: Jul 2001 Posts: 5,003 Location: baker, fl, usa Status: couple Swing Lifestyle Name:tblonde312
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Reading over all the great suggestions that have been given so far to everyone made us go back and flesh out our ad a little bit...reading over it again there are still a few things I have thought about adding but ya'll can take a look and see what's missing on it. Here Teresa |
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__________________ Ted and Teresa No lifetime is enough unless you live it in such a way as to make it enough. | |
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| Swingers Board Addict Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 352 Location: Street, Maryland Status: Couple Swing Lifestyle Name:nymphansatyr
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TNT- EXCELLENT profile, in our humble opinion. The pictures are tasteful, and erotic. The prose is clear, and easy to read. This could be a model template- again- in our humble opinion. p.s. stop smoking- it's bad for erections |
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| Active Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 18 Location: South Carolina Status: Couple Swing Lifestyle Name:SC_GAcouple
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I would love to hear suggestions for our profile.... SC_GAcouple Thanks, R (f) |
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| Chimpin' Ain't Easy Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 6,739 Location: Ohio Status: Married Monkeys - will you be our vine? Swing Lifestyle Name:Spoomonkey
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TNT - I thought it was great. The pictures are, as stated above, tasteful, yet VERY erotic. Nice beach pics, too. Makes me miss home... Spoomonkey |
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__________________ "Eros will have naked bodies; Friendship naked personalities." - C. S. Lewis | |
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| | #36 (permalink) |
| Swingers Board Addict Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 1,425 Location: Indiana Status: Blissfull SITCOM Swing Lifestyle Name:northindycpl
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Ok.... We are northindycpl on Swing Lifestyle. I dislike the ability to separate paragraphs in the descriptions. I have not been able to figure out how to do that if at all- Does anyone know? We still get a lot of response to the ad, maybe 10 a week, plus the ones that we send there. BTW, I like my naked pictures. So I want to keep them up. We aren't a face pic kinda couple |
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| Swingers Board Addict Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 1,425 Location: Indiana Status: Blissfull SITCOM Swing Lifestyle Name:northindycpl
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)-Avoid abbreviations -Add a bit more information. I was wondering what kind of fun you were looking for? The ad leaves me with the impression that you are somewhat new, and so fun to you could mean flirting and some soft. I would be more inclined to respond if I clearly knew the perimeters of what you desire. -I want to know more about you two. Are you professional? Do you enjoy going out to clubs, or would you prefer to have dinner? What are your hobbies? What you look like isn't as important to me as who you are. -Now, since you are new, I would like to know more about your experiences, and your fantasies. Have you experienced a club- do you want to go back? Is your fantasy to be with another couple or singles only? | |
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| | #39 (permalink) |
| Swingers Board Addict Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 165 Location: Long Beach
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Great, thanks for offering this for us. He is ours, and if anyone viewing it has any interest, please write us as well *smile* http://ChrisSuzanne.swinglifestyle.com Please don't be kind, as we would really like to improve. |
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| Your Hostess Join Date: Nov 2002 Posts: 29,294 Location: In my House Status: Female Swing Lifestyle Name:swingersboard
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I have to agree with the earlier comment that you need to flesh it out a bit and be a little more descriptive with what it is you are hoping to find. Even if it's just to go to the fantasy section and actually list some of the fantasies you'd like to fulfill through swinging. | |
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| Your Hostess Join Date: Nov 2002 Posts: 29,294 Location: In my House Status: Female Swing Lifestyle Name:swingersboard
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What does like-minded mean? I think I may start a thread with this question. Unless we know how you think, we don't know if we are like-minded. Open-minded might be a better adjective to use there. What do you consider freaky? Is tying you up too much? Or do you just not want someone to bring their animals along? soft-swings = soft-swingers Fantasies and Experiences: Quote:
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| Mod Squad Member Join Date: Jul 2002 Posts: 6,919 Location: Reno, Nevada Status: Married to Mrs Good Times Swing Lifestyle Name:randp
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A lot of your profiles are so good it makes me a little self conscious about ours, but I can always use any suggestions that might improve it. So here it is, let me know what you think. As far as certification goes, we have a lot of the reservations that the Naughty's mentioned about them. And while we have met a fair number of people as a result of our Swing Lifestyle ad, no one has ever offered to certify us yet; I'm not really sure why that is though. |
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__________________ R (He is R, she is P) | |
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| | #44 (permalink) | |
| Swingers Board Addict Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 1,425 Location: Indiana Status: Blissfull SITCOM Swing Lifestyle Name:northindycpl
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The other thing I noticed was your desired age range. This is completely my opinion- and it may not be shared by others- Do you really want to swing with those 18 years or so younger? I wouldn't want to. I would also be leary of someone who was interested in me if I were 18-28 years younger. I would wonder what we have in common, how is it possible to click, the differences in our lifestyles, etc. I do like your picture- it just needs to be closer. | |
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| | #45 (permalink) |
| Active Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 39 Location: Verona, Ill (near Seneca)
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We would love to hear comments and suggestions on our profile. Does anyone think our interests to be out of the mainstream of most swingers? Any thoughts will be appreciated. dodiddle@swinglifestyle.com |
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