Couples Profile Reviews

[wiscpl]

We would love someone to review our profile. http://wicpl2002us.swinglifestyle.com

[loveonme01]

will you do ours pls..
loveonme01 sls facelick

[northindycpl]

Although I am not Julie, I wanted to Chime in NakedInSeattle.

I think that you have a great profile! Your pictures are fantastic and tastefully done. I love that you have added a picture of you guys with your little dog. It left me with the impression that you are fun, kind and genuine.

I think your descriptions are nice. You have definately covered a lot of ground. I wonder if it would read better if you included combined descriptions Such as:

'She is an active triathelete, who loves SCUBA diving, sports, and gourmet cooking. We are avid Nudists who love the outdoors.'

Also, I am not sure what the Fraternity thing is, but I think that may be a cute tag line. It would definately get my attention.

[JustAskJulie]

Don't leave it to me to comment here, please. My idea was for anyone to review others profiles and to have their own reviewed if they like. We all see different things when we look and while a profile may be perfect to one person someone else may see something that jumps out at them as a great big red flag or question mark. We can all learn something from this

[northindycpl]

Originally Posted by wiscpl

We would love someone to review our profile. http://wicpl2002us.swinglifestyle.com

The thing that jumped out at me was that you joined SLS is 2002 and still haven't been certified, or have a picture on-line. I would immediately think you were a man whose wife doesn't know anything about this. That may not be the case, but that is my immediate reaction when I see an that.

There were a couple of typos in the ad, but I think if you copy and paste your ad into MS Word, it will tell you where the grammatical and spelling errors are, and give you suggestions on repairing them.

http://gapfiller.swinglifestyle.com
I would love some outside opinions, bring it on, I can take it.

[JustAskJulie]

Biblonde I really can't come up with anything to say about yours. Great pics, and you obviously have put a lot of thought into your profile. It's thorough and interesting.

NakedInSeattle, I have to agree with Indy, I found myself with two questions reading your profile - what the heck is Fraternity Snoqualmie? and how long have you guys been swinging?

Wiscpl - a picture would probably increase your responses. Although you do address that and hopefully the way you have addressed it increases the number of serious replies that you get to your ad.
I'm wondering if you find yourselves getting responses from single guys. Even tho you don't mention single guys in your ad I saw a couple of things that might draw them to you like,

watching her with another man. If this is what you like let us know.

[JustAskJulie]

loveonme01 - your pictures leave me wondering if you are a 2female couple. No pics of the guy whatsoever? And you don't list a weight for him, I noticed. Those two things together would definately leave me wondering what was up with you two.

all so =also

I would suggest taking some time to go back through and write out your responses rather than using shorthand and actually capitilize your sentances, etc. Remember, this is your first impression; and things like this

i have been with a cpl of Lady's b/f

leave one unsure if you are saying you've been with a couple of ladies before, or a couple of lady's boyfriends.

Your profile is very centered around the female half. Does the male not participate? If so you should make that clear. Does he just like to watch? You mentioned your desire to give him a FMF threesome, are you interested in swapping partners with another couple? You did mention seeking couples. Or, are you guys just looking for bi females willing to join the two of you.

Basically, I would just really take some time to express what it is that you are looking for. I'm sure you know what that is, but you have to make sure that those reading your profile know when they are doing reading.

[biblonde]

Originally Posted by smileytattoo

http://gapfiller.swinglifestyle.com
I would love some outside opinions, bring it on, I can take it.

Love the tats! profile looks okay to us...but I would leave out the Pet part..that just makes ya go ewwww...even though that isnt something you are into most arent so doesnt need to be said.

[wiscpl]

The thing that jumped out at me was that you joined SLS is 2002 and still haven't been certified, or have a picture on-line. I would immediately think you were a man whose wife doesn't know anything about this. That may not be the case, but that is my immediate reaction when I see an that.

I can see what you mean. Although I, the male half, do most of the posting she is in this 100%. There are two reasons we haven't been certified on SLS. 1) The coupls we have meet on SLS were not paid members and you need to be a paid member to certify someone. 2) We haven't had much luck finding couples we are interested in. We are not snobs but we have certain criteria that we go by. This reduces the amount of success we have on there but that is by our choice.

Thanks for the feedback northindycpl. We had pictures but took them down and are in the process of getting more. (Which can be just as much fun as swinging at times.)

[northindycpl]

Originally Posted by JustAskJulie

loveonme01 - your pictures leave me wondering if you are a 2female couple. No pics of the guy whatsoever? And you don't list a weight for him, I noticed. Those two things together would definately leave me wondering what was up with you two.

all so =also

I would suggest taking some time to go back through and write out your responses rather than using shorthand and actually capitilize your sentances, etc. Remember, this is your first impression; and things like this leave one unsure if you are saying you've been with a couple of ladies before, or a couple of lady's boyfriends.

Your profile is very centered around the female half. Does the male not participate? If so you should make that clear. Does he just like to watch? You mentioned your desire to give him a FMF threesome, are you interested in swapping partners with another couple? You did mention seeking couples. Or, are you guys just looking for bi females willing to join the two of you.

Basically, I would just really take some time to express what it is that you are looking for. I'm sure you know what that is, but you have to make sure that those reading your profile know when they are doing reading.

Dito! I agree with your comments as well. I also thought they were a lesbian couple.

[TNT]

Originally Posted by smileytattoo

http://gapfiller.swinglifestyle.com
I would love some outside opinions, bring it on, I can take it.

I just have to say that the pic with the smiley face is just to cute...shows a great sense of humor.

Teresa

[Spoomonkey]

Good timing!

We haven't been having much luck with ours, so we were going to redo it this weekend - maybe even (GASP) add a couple of pics... Big step for the monkeys...

Anyhoo - here it is.

Spoomonkey

PS - How do you get certified?

Originally Posted by Spoomonkey

Good timing!

We haven't been having much luck with ours, so we were going to redo it this weekend - maybe even (GASP) add a couple of pics... Big step for the monkeys...

Anyhoo - here it is.

Spoomonkey

PS - How do you get certified?

Hey Monkeys!

I've told you before that I absolutly love your profile. The only thing I would add is a pic-I understand your reluctance, but don't show faces.

Everyone is talking about the certification thing.........we state in our profile that we do not certify nor do we accept certifications-because we did that with our old profile & were sort of, how shall I say......virtually stalked I guess.

Sls techsupport will certify you if you submit a video recording.

[TNT]

Originally Posted by Spoomonkey

Good timing!

We haven't been having much luck with ours, so we were going to redo it this weekend - maybe even (GASP) add a couple of pics... Big step for the monkeys...

Anyhoo - here it is.

Spoomonkey

PS - How do you get certified?

I agree with the Naughty's ...a pic is definitely needed...not one necessarily showing your faces but one like Mrs. Spoos avatar pic would be great. Of course even without a pic, just reading over it , it would/did definitely capture my interest and make me want to know more.

Teresa