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We would love someone to review our profile. http://wicpl2002us.swinglifestyle.com |
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__________________ "The difference between fiction and reality? Fiction has to make sense." - Tom Clancy | |
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| Swingers Board Addict Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 1,425 Location: Indiana Status: Blissfull SITCOM Swing Lifestyle Name:northindycpl
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Although I am not Julie, I wanted to Chime in NakedInSeattle. I think that you have a great profile! Your pictures are fantastic and tastefully done. I love that you have added a picture of you guys with your little dog. It left me with the impression that you are fun, kind and genuine. I think your descriptions are nice. You have definately covered a lot of ground. I wonder if it would read better if you included combined descriptions Such as: 'She is an active triathelete, who loves SCUBA diving, sports, and gourmet cooking. We are avid Nudists who love the outdoors.' Also, I am not sure what the Fraternity thing is, but I think that may be a cute tag line. It would definately get my attention. |
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| Your Hostess Join Date: Nov 2002 Posts: 29,294 Location: In my House Status: Female Swing Lifestyle Name:swingersboard
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Don't leave it to me to comment here, please. My idea was for anyone to review others profiles and to have their own reviewed if they like. We all see different things when we look and while a profile may be perfect to one person someone else may see something that jumps out at them as a great big red flag or question mark. We can all learn something from this |
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| Swingers Board Addict Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 1,425 Location: Indiana Status: Blissfull SITCOM Swing Lifestyle Name:northindycpl
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There were a couple of typos in the ad, but I think if you copy and paste your ad into MS Word, it will tell you where the grammatical and spelling errors are, and give you suggestions on repairing them. | |
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| http://gapfiller.swinglifestyle.com I would love some outside opinions, bring it on, I can take it. |
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| Your Hostess Join Date: Nov 2002 Posts: 29,294 Location: In my House Status: Female Swing Lifestyle Name:swingersboard
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Biblonde I really can't come up with anything to say about yours. Great pics, and you obviously have put a lot of thought into your profile. It's thorough and interesting. NakedInSeattle, I have to agree with Indy, I found myself with two questions reading your profile - what the heck is Fraternity Snoqualmie? and how long have you guys been swinging? Wiscpl - a picture would probably increase your responses. Although you do address that and hopefully the way you have addressed it increases the number of serious replies that you get to your ad. I'm wondering if you find yourselves getting responses from single guys. Even tho you don't mention single guys in your ad I saw a couple of things that might draw them to you like, Quote:
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| Your Hostess Join Date: Nov 2002 Posts: 29,294 Location: In my House Status: Female Swing Lifestyle Name:swingersboard
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loveonme01 - your pictures leave me wondering if you are a 2female couple. No pics of the guy whatsoever? And you don't list a weight for him, I noticed. Those two things together would definately leave me wondering what was up with you two. all so =also I would suggest taking some time to go back through and write out your responses rather than using shorthand and actually capitilize your sentances, etc. Remember, this is your first impression; and things like this Quote:
Your profile is very centered around the female half. Does the male not participate? If so you should make that clear. Does he just like to watch? You mentioned your desire to give him a FMF threesome, are you interested in swapping partners with another couple? You did mention seeking couples. Or, are you guys just looking for bi females willing to join the two of you. Basically, I would just really take some time to express what it is that you are looking for. I'm sure you know what that is, but you have to make sure that those reading your profile know when they are doing reading. | |
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| Swingers Board Addict Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 1,020 Location: sacramento Status: couple Swing Lifestyle Name:curious1918
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Thanks for the feedback northindycpl. We had pictures but took them down and are in the process of getting more. (Which can be just as much fun as swinging at times.) | |
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__________________ "The difference between fiction and reality? Fiction has to make sense." - Tom Clancy Last edited by wiscpl; 02-17-2005 at 07:32 PM. | ||
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| Swingers Board Addict Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 1,425 Location: Indiana Status: Blissfull SITCOM Swing Lifestyle Name:northindycpl
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__________________ Mrs. Indy | ||
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| Julie's Helper Join Date: Jul 2001 Posts: 5,003 Location: baker, fl, usa Status: couple Swing Lifestyle Name:tblonde312
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I just have to say that the pic with the smiley face is just to cute...shows a great sense of humor. Teresa | |
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__________________ Ted and Teresa No lifetime is enough unless you live it in such a way as to make it enough. | ||
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| Chimpin' Ain't Easy Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 6,739 Location: Ohio Status: Married Monkeys - will you be our vine? Swing Lifestyle Name:Spoomonkey
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Good timing! We haven't been having much luck with ours, so we were going to redo it this weekend - maybe even (GASP) add a couple of pics... Big step for the monkeys... Anyhoo - here it is. Spoomonkey PS - How do you get certified? |
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__________________ "Eros will have naked bodies; Friendship naked personalities." - C. S. Lewis | |
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I've told you before that I absolutly love your profile. The only thing I would add is a pic-I understand your reluctance, but don't show faces. Everyone is talking about the certification thing.........we state in our profile that we do not certify nor do we accept certifications-because we did that with our old profile & were sort of, how shall I say......virtually stalked I guess. Swing Lifestyle techsupport will certify you if you submit a video recording. | |
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| Julie's Helper Join Date: Jul 2001 Posts: 5,003 Location: baker, fl, usa Status: couple Swing Lifestyle Name:tblonde312
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__________________ Ted and Teresa No lifetime is enough unless you live it in such a way as to make it enough. | ||
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