Couples Profile Reviews

[good times]

Hi Bunny,

I thought your profile was pretty good, albeit a little long, it gives a good overview of what you like and disslike and is well written.

Originally Posted by bear_n_bunny

BTW, did anyone share on how to put paragraphs in an Swing Lifestyle profile section? Can you use HTML?

Yes, you use HTML to format your parragraphs and text on Swing Lifestyle.

[mrucumandohmy69]

We would also love to have our profiles reviewed: here is our joint account -
http://mrucumandohmy69.swinglifestyle.com and my account - http://ohmy69.swinglifestyle.com. Let us know what you think - we are always open to improvement!

[bear_n_bunny]

Goodtimes, thanks for your comments on our profile. If you've ever seen Bear's posts, you won't be surprised to find out that is the short version of our profile.

I'll be putting in the paragraphs shortly. Gotta love that HTML.

mrucumandohmy69, I read your couple profile. "Describe Yourself" and "I/We are looking for" are the same paragraph. You might want to break it up as you address both areas in the one paragraph. Personally, I'd like to know more about what you are looking for; full swap or soft swap.

You also state you want to move slowly. I was wondering what you mean by slowly? A few meetings before hand, emails and chatting? Or something else. I know when I read the term slowly I wonder about the seriousness of the couple.

This is just me being picky; you write you are both nymphos. The term nympho is specific to the female gender. You might consider a different term.

-- Bunny

[caveman]

Greetings,
We have to agree with Vespertine as well. The Ranchcouple have a great profile and chose a very nice pic. So much nicer than the graphic, in your face stuff you see so much of. Nice to see a little class, I mean ass, in the chaps.
Meanddaddy[QUOTE]:claps

[caveman]

"claps, bear with me y'all, i'm trying to get the hang of these here smileys.

[robnnikki]

Any coments are welcome
http://robnnikki.swinglifestyle.com

[robnnikki]

Originally Posted by Nymph an' Satyr

It's a VERY nice profile Spoomonkey. But here is why it would not attract us.

1.You have no pictures at all. We are not going to bother with emails, sending attachments, etc. It's easy enough to do- but it's just time and aggravation.

2. You are not certified. And you have been members for almost a year. Not having been certified in that time frame makes us think that you are a want-to-be. The certification means that you have actually met someone- hence you are not a poser, lamer- or adjective of your choice. Doesn't mean that that is the case- but that's what runs through our minds.

We will meet non-certified couples- but only with some trepidation.

We respectfully disagree with Mr&Mrs-naughty's stance- but it seems that they have reasons. And they offered a solution- certification by the Swing Lifestyle management.

Add some pics- and make them private. And get certified.

Now as far as the prose itself- EXCELLENT. Wouldn't change a thing. Well, there is the "platmates" typo

We agree with the idea of needing pics, real ones. One problem for newer cpls is HOW to get certified by other cpls. We have only talked to 2 cpls on Swing Lifestyle, one that found us never returned an email. Theirs said "Hi how r u" ours said "Good U" that was it. Generally speaking if their r no pics, we dont even bother.

[LikeMinds321]

Originally Posted by robnnikki

Any coments are welcome
http://robnnikki.swinglifestyle.com

Your profile has a lot of personality and really communicates your character. Especially the tag line: "Enjoy Naked Footstool Racing!"

I got a kick out of that.

You have included pictures of you - together - and I always feel that's a plus in a couples profile.

The sentences are complete and grammar is good all the way through until the last line when you write "u" instead of "you," which was inconsistent with the rest of your writing style.

You write, "We are a both or none at all couple, you don't get one without the other no matter how good you think you are." I highlighted the part of the sentence that I didn't think you need to include. You've already made it clear in the first part of the sentence that you only play together.

You emphasize that you like sex, sex, sex, but you haven't said anything about what sexual activities you both enjoy. That's the only addition I'd suggest.

You've got a profile with a lot of spark and I think overall you've done a great job.

LM

[Lotolaffs]

OK, we're game. Take a look at ours: http://lotolaffs.swinglifestyle.com.

Thank you for your interest.

[sensuality]

We re-did our profile,because we realize no one even reads it. 9 times out of 10,lately, we've had to repeat ourselves anyway!! They see the pic, and write.Simple as that. Ahh, superficiality. <EG>

[CandTinLorainCo]

Ok you have convinced us, check ours out and share your thoughts. Its not the best but hey we never wrote one before and a little criticsm isn't all that bad either.
http://CandTinLorainCo.swinglifestyle.com.

[C n' D 4playin]

Since there are a couple more recent posts on this thread......
We might as well just jump right in there too. (readjusting the profiles might be a worthwhile task, while the freakin' snow is melting off my freshly and unwisely fertilized lawn)

be gentle but honest.......

C n' D

Swing Lifestyle profile... http://cnd4playin.swinglifestyle.com

the one on Snet is almost identical in substance......just varies in which paragraph goes where. CnD4playin there also. http://www.swappernet.com/sn/profile...ser=CND4PLAYIN

[turrywolez]

Can you please give a review of our profile:
http://turrywolez.swinglifestyle.com
Thanks

[LikeMinds321]

Originally Posted by Lotolaffs

OK, we're game. Take a look at ours: http://lotolaffs.swinglifestyle.com.

Thank you for your interest.

I found your profile very easy to read; it flowed - I could hear the words coming off your lips. I never had to go back and reread, you made everything clear - that's rare in profiles.

You come across very approachable, fun, and positive about swinging. You don't mention what types of play you seek, if that's important to you, or you have limits as to what you'll do, you could bring those up. Are you open to couples, single men and women? If not, you might want to state who you'll meet.

Your pictures are great! And because you have other private pictures to share, I think that encourages people to contact you too. Do you require pictures from people before you will meet them? If so, you could add that to the profile.

The point about "grandchildren" was cleverly stated.

You have a uniquely written profile which makes you a standout.

LM

[LikeMinds321]

Originally Posted by CandTinLorainCo

Ok you have convinced us, check ours out and share your thoughts. Its not the best but hey we never wrote one before and a little criticsm isn't all that bad either.
http://CandTinLorainCo.swinglifestyle.com.

I like your positive Tag Line: "Enjoy life and all it presents"

Your profile is brief, but that's understandable since you're just starting out. What you do have is great. I did find a couple of grammar/spelling corrections you could make:

I/We are looking for
honesty, descression, fun loving couples... = honest, discreet

altogather = altogether

Your sentence on being shy was nicely worded. I liked it very much.

If you could add a few words about activities you enjoy, either socially or sexually, this would help interested people know what you're hoping to experience with them. Also, pictures do bring more people to a profile. Even if you prefer to keep them private, consider adding a couple.

Something I found helpful when starting out, was reading many other profiles. It gave me a lot of good ideas of things to include in our profile.

You have a great start!

LM