Mr. Essex - I couldn't find your profile? What's your sls name?
Taylor74 - Very nice! It's written intelligently with a bit of humor. A tad long winded at times...but I'm terribly guilty of that myself.
Things i liked:
- The very first sentence is great!
- Good spelling and grammar
- Your overall approach to the lifestyle, and openness to diversity
- Your photo (nice!)
- Your humor
- Your tagline
Things for improvement:
- The paragraph begining "As a single male..." i'm not sure what you were meaning to say here?
- Fantasies and Experiences Section: Last sentence doesn't make sense...might be inadvertently insulting.
- Need more "physical" in the description section! I like your personality...now make me want your body!
- Need more in the fantasies...not just "who" but "what"...what is your idea of crazy fun?
Best of luck!