Hey there,
After you re-write your profile, whichever site it's on, you can ask for comments in the Couples Profile Reviews thread. It's under "General Swingers Stuff". People give very helpful feedback there.
You sound like a straightforward guy, and you express yourself well -- at least, as far as I can tell from three posts! I'm sure you'll have a great profile.
When you find the right place to meet people (online or in person), you'll know it. I just hope you find it soon, because it sounds like you've put a lot of effort in!
Stick around on the Board, too. It's a real community, even though it's virtual
